Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-31628060-20141205173733/@comment-5073094-20141206005203

I feel like you could add some more to your hisroty. It only tells me where she was born and her life after high school. Maybe you should add how it was like growing up for her, how she made friends, if it was easy making friends, some hardships and challenges for her, etc. You can always feel free to put as much detail as possible.