Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-25380060-20141120133948/@comment-3058106-20141120135120

Could you please write more on his personality? I don't feel like you actually wrote much about how he acts but more about what he likes to do. So please elaborate more on that by giving him some personality traits.

Also, please write more about his history other than the bullying. There has to have been more to his life than moving and bullying. Maybe add more about his parents opinions on all of it. Did they ever ground him for punching a kid? For hurting others? What made him start selling things?