Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-24492951-20150901035530/@comment-5073094-20150901040226

Okay, I see a couple of things that need fixing. First of all, her personality section includes some really different traits of her's. Don't get me wrong, that's great and continue with that, but I'd like to know how they all tie in with her. Secondly, her history has a lot of holes in it. What happened to her between her birth and when she turned thirteen? List some families she's lived with and her experiences. How did they shape her? Expand on her public school experience. All you really mentioned was that she did drugs. Explain more on how she got into that crowd or if she recovered, if at all. Also, the last paragraph confused the heck out of me. Who is Gracie and how does she know Aria?