Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-24492951-20150901035530/@comment-5073094-20150901144651

I read over the personality and history sections, and there is a huge improvement. I would just recommend for you to look over it and fix all of the spelling and grammar errors, since I spotted quite a few. You should also put some sections of the history and personality into paragraphs, instead of one big clump. Overall, I love what you added.