Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-24492951-20150803182449/@comment-5073094-20150803210352

I feel like you should really elaborate more on Caylie's personality. Sure, she's shy and closed off, but I really want to know more about her. How does she approach certain people? What's her outlook on life? Explain her complexity.

Next, her history is a bit brief. In the first paragraph, it jumps from her birth to her fifteenth birthday. What happened in between? How was her life at school? Did anything else impact her? And also, I'm really interested in her life after the move, with her father going through depression, and marrying another woman. I think you should explain more about that process. You could feel free to be very creative with this.