Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-25693292-20141129020115/@comment-4199666-20141129031113

Hey, so first of all, you don't really need to mention Becky's personality in her personality section.

Secondly, you may want to reconsider calling them identical twins. Usually for identical twins, people will use the same FC or they'll use real twins. There are twins called fraternal twins, and while they may look similar, they are not identical.

Also, her history should be written entirely in past tense and most of the history section here could go into the family section on her page. I want you to think that if your character was asked to describe how they grew up, how would they do it. You can even write it from your character's perspective.