Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-24492951-20150815024031/@comment-24930755-20150815025545

Okay. So, to start off, I feel like the history is kind if lacking some important things like how he felt not being able to grow up with his real parents. I know it says he grew up with his parents, but I'm not sure what you meant by that. Did he not know in a way they never met because they passed away? Did his sister even tell him about his late parents? I'm a little confused with all of that. I also want to see at least a little information about Ambrose's relationship with Zaylia, Mayra and Cam, just so that we know if he's having a good life at home and whatnot. I also want to see more important events that had happened so far in his high school life to give his history more depth. You can also add more to the personality since I feel like there's something lacking, but I can't seem to know what it is. Anyways, I hoped this made sense.