Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-25380060-20150118154058/@comment-3058106-20150119013953

So, I feel like you need to add more of what happened before her accident. Also, it's a bit confusing too. Like, how old was she when she was found on the beach? What was her life like before that? Sure, she may not remember it, but it'd still be nice to know what happened beforehand. What happened to her parents? Are they still trying to find her?

Also, this is a bit far out there and a little unrealistic. I feel like that at some point someone would've been able to remember her. I'd suggest that maybe the people who found her actually knew who she was beforehand. Also, perhaps when they actually found out who she was, she was taken in by her godparents. Honestly, I'm pretty sure they could have been able to figure out who she was at some point. She also would've probably been put in foster care and such for a while before she could have been adopted by the couple who found her.