Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-24492951-20150903043246/@comment-5073094-20150903195944

Almost everything is okay, but in the history, you mentioned that Nathan had OCD. Obsessive compulsice disorder doesn't necessarily mean that you're a neat freak and you clean a lot. It's actually a serious disorder that gives people excessive thoughts that can be charactrized as obsessive, leading to repetitive behavior which can be characterized as compulsive. It's usually experienced through panic attacks, heavy anxiety, easy agitation, and/or frequent discontent. Fron what you've written, I don't really see any of these symptoms there. Good substitutes for writing OCD would be particular, neat, or obsessive cleaning. If you'd like to characterize him as someone who has OCD, it would be best to put that into his personality with a really good description of his behavior.

Also, just add a little bit more to his history, maybe some more about his experiences in school, or what impacted him growing up.