Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-4041126-20140920171530/@comment-3058106-20140920202828

I think you have a sufficient amount of history, but could you please add a bit more about her feelings towards her father leaving. Even if she still doesn't know that he actually left, maybe just add a bit more about her feelings about how her father is no longer in her life. Also include some more about how she feels about how mother no longer really being around. Does she often miss coming home to see her? Does she wish her mother could get better soon so she can come back home? Add a bit more about that.