Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-4041126-20140920171530/@comment-4041126-20140920204508

I added these things:

Mary wishes that he would come back soon, and really misses him. She feels that he has been gone too long, and even though she wouldn't admit it, has started to forget what he was like since the last time she saw him she was so young.

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Mary was very upset when she heard about how her mother wasn't getting that much better and that her mom would not be able to take care of her for a long time.

and

(Mary visits her mother every week,) and feels that every week her mother gets stronger, which keeps her from getting depressed. She hopes her mother could get better, and that her father could finally come back, so she could have a normal life again.

Is that good?