Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-4978605-20160117170053/@comment-3058106-20160117171720

Hey, welcome to the roleplay!

I can't really approve your form right now because there's a couple of issues. First off all, you need to fix the personality section. Think about who she is and what she acts like. For examples, you can check out my characters Adrian Capaldi, Brooke Vincent, and Hayden Archer. They each have different personality sections but they go over exactly how the character acts and such. I'd suggest reading over them to get an idea. If you need help thinking of personality traits, look here, here, here, and here. Also make sure you use about an equal amount of negative and positive traits. Make sure that you also write in complete sentences. Also the part where you wrote that she spends most of her time drawing, reading, or going on the internet is more of a trivia fact rather than personality. Maybe include that somewhere else.

Also, the history needs to be much, much longer. Think about what all has happened throughout her life and how that has changed her as a person. Once again, you can use the three character examples I linked above. Obviously it does not need to be as long as Adrian or Brooke's, but Hayden's seems like a good length that most users tend to do. It's about four paragraphs that go over everything that has happened to him. You can look at other characters' histories too for help if you need it.

I also do love the faceclaim you've picked out, but I'm afraid she's too old to be playing someone born in 1999. If you want her to be a high school student, I'd suggest making her either 18 now and a senior and about to graduate, or make her 19 and say that she failed a grade and had to repeat (so she's still a senior and about to graduate). That would still kind of be pushing it, but I think we could allow it if you did one of those. It's just that the fc is 24 years old and looks to be about 20-24 and can't really play a high schooler. So you could maybe make it to where she's 19/20 and already out of high school if you want. I also know it's hard to find trans fcs, so I may try to see if I can find any other suggestions that could work better for the age range that you want.