Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-6895154-20141110030541/@comment-4199666-20141110031151

Hey, there are a few things that need to be fixed up on this befroe I can claim it. For starters, the personality section needs to be written in sentence form and should be at least a paragraph (3 sentences) long. You might also want to add some negative personality qualities there. I find this helpful if you're having trouble thinking of negative personality traits.

Secondly, the history could use a bit of development. There's barely any questions answered about his childhood. Did he have a childhood crush? Any pets? Has he ever broken a bone? Did he play sports when he was younger? Did he like school or hate school? etc. etc. Please add more to both of these sections and let me know when you do.