Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-25380060-20150111001308/@comment-5073094-20150111010640

Okay, the form is almost all set. The second paragraph of the personality section seems like it would fit better in the family section. I feel like maybe you could add a bit more to the personality, just to give anybody ele a good idea of who they're going to roleplay with.

Next, I think you should expand on the history a bit. Maybe add some other details in, like how he was doing in school, what he did with his friends, etc. You could get pretty creative.