Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-25693292-20141127075435/@comment-4199666-20141127130738

Could you please add a bit more to the history and personality sections. The personality section is very brief and it doesn't describe at all what happens when she's upset or angry, whether she's prone to getting upset easily or if she's hard to upset. Just try to make it roughly a paragraph long.

The history section doesn't say much about how she grew up, with the main focus of her history being one week ago. Did she have a childhood friend growing up? Did she move around a lot? Was she closer with her friends or her family? These are just some starter questions, but I'd love to hear more about what she did growing up rather than just the past week.

Also, considering character pages get old, you may want to consider changing 'a week ago' to say the 21st of November, 2014.