Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-10438693-20140615151432/@comment-3058106-20140615164158

Could you write more on her history? I feel like a few more thoughts on her background and what her childhood was like would be more insightful to her personality. Also, add a bit more to her personality since describing what a person looks like is not part of their personality.

For the history section, maybe add more to why she is self-absorbed. How did she get this way? Did her parents spoil her all the time? Really, all I know about her personality is that she's self-absorbed and feminine. That's it. Please add more personality traits to your character and give her a broader background.