Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-25380060-20150206104658/@comment-4199666-20150206113650

History is good but the personality could use a bit of work. For example, you used the word 'optimistic' to describe him but didn't fit in anywhere in his personality section. Most of it just talks about his parents leaving him and nothing else. How does he treat strangers? Is he outgoing or shy? Will he fight for what he believes in or will he back down? Try to think of the kind of things he would find important and then think why he feels that way and which personality traits they link back to.