Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-24492951-20150804222928/@comment-3058106-20150804233041

Can you please add more to her personality? it needs a bit more depth to it. Also, maybe write more in her history from after she is 15 to the present. You skipped an important part of her life and it may need more. Maybe write what inspired her to become a fashion photographer and stuff like that. Just add a bit more to it.