Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-24706738-20140729030751/@comment-3058106-20140729132107

Thanks for editing it! Also, when you make the character page, please add just a bit more to the history. It's still rather short since there's only 1-2 sentences per paragraph. Plus, I still don't feel like I have full understanding of this character's past.

In order to add more to your character's history, you need to think of more information about their past. Maybe write a bit more about her feelings about her parents' deaths. How did the grief affect her? How was her reactions to the news? Did she shut herself off which made her aunt get her the art supplies? Then maybe add some to the art information. Why did this prove to be a calming effect to her? How did it relax her? Also, maybe you could write a bit more about her relationship with her sister and why they're so close to each other.