Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-28088364-20160330020043/@comment-5073094-20160330021928

Welcome to the wiki! Your character form is pretty good, but there are just a few things I'd recommend. First, I think you should add more detail to the history. I only pretty much gained knowledge on her relationship with her family. I would really be interested in what events shaped her as a person, her parents' divorce (if they were ever married, might be a good thing to add), her school experiences, social status, etc. Feel free to be very creative with this and make it so someone else has a good understanding your your character's background.

The last thing is pretty minor. I spotted some spelling and grammar mistakes that are easy to fix so go ahead and fix them if you spot them.