Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-25860666-20140919211158/@comment-4199666-20140920053107

Just as a future tip, "looses it" should be loses it, and the history could be written a little more detailed as to what has happened in between. You don't say much about what's happened to her since moving to Barfield, and you could add more. I'll leave that up to you though, seeing as this is just satisfactory.