Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-24492951-20150804222928/@comment-3058106-20150805021243

I still feel like you could maybe add a bit more to her personality and history. Maybe try and figure out a few different personality traits she has. This website and this website can help you generate random traits. Since you already have a basic personality set up, This masterlist has a list of positive and negative traits. Basically you can go from the list and then write more about it. Let's say she was very ambitious, you could write more about that. Write a sentence or so about why she is ambitous and how she is. Not saying that she is, but that's just an example. Also, don't just pick out random traits that wouldn't work well together. For example, you can't say that she's very careless, but she's very responsible. The two are opposite traits and don't work together.

This website also includes links to help with personality and character history. Some links may be broken, but I'm not sure. I didn't exactly go through and click every single one.

As for the history, now you've opened up more questions. Maybe write more about her struggle with her sexuality. Write more about her life in high school. Also, if she is attending BCC, she can only got her associate's degree.