Board Thread:Creation Box/@comment-24930755-20141010071319/@comment-4199666-20141010094419

No problem. The thing is that a sentence should have one tense only. Also, seeing as this is a history, most of the verbs should be past tense (basically the add an 'ed' form to a verb). So the second sentence should be A few months after the twins' birth, her parents divorced and her mother took Gabriella with her, leaving Daniella and her father behind.

There's more in the next paragraph too, move should be moved, becomes = became, turns = turned and so on, if that makes sense.

If not, give me a shout and I can help you out a bit more.